Six Word Story Every Day

Classe!

Très bon concept.

Je suis d’accord avec Pauline

Nice visuals, but I think you have missed the point of Hemingway’s six word story.
It told a story. It’s a tricky task, which it why he was set the challenge in the first place.
I fear you have failed to tell a story in all but one of your ‘six words’ « First nigh, sunrise found us sleeping » the rest are merely sentences.

Mon prof de maths écrit mieux